Consuming kids essay..is this a good start?

Children represent the ultimate price, unprecedented,elusive and powerful demographic to be cut and captured at all costs because they have their own purchasing power. They influence their parents' buying decisions and they're the adult consumers of the future. Most would say advertisement is a way to promote information about services and products, but in most cases, it involves deception and manipulation. Cooperate advertisers have become much more delibaerate in their attempts and strategies to captivate and influence children.